Your eyes.

By HiddenBehindTheMask

Mon, 22 Aug 2011
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All you have to do is gaze,
To know you're not alone,
Safe in your eyes,
A place I can finally call home.

I often find myself drowning,
Lost in your ocean of blue,
I hope to find a part of myself,
Hiding deep inside you.

Looks can sometimes be deceiving,
But your eyes reveal the truth,
Maybe I know them too well,
I've revised them from my youth.

I fall for you over and over,
When I see the love in them,
I couldn't live,
If I never saw them again.

Just a quick poem.. for those of you that don't know me (you probably don't) I'm Emma and I'm 15.

Certificate PG
Poem
Love

Comments

Submitted by maggyvaneijk on
Hi Emma, this is beautiful. You've got so much talent and you're only 15. Like the speaker does in those blue eyes I found myself getting lost in this poem with its soothing rhythm. Good job!

 

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Emma Hello! What a lovely romantic poem, and those blue eyes, I had to read it twice, I was so enwrapped in it. 15 years of age, what talent. And the title. Keep writing. Welcome back. julie

Submitted by HiddenBehindTheMask on
Thank you!