The thaw
By hoalarg1
Tue, 17 Jul 2012
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I melted on the peaks one blue skied morning
while you were still sleeping
trickled under ice heavy from your night's dreams
At an unfamiliar angle I almost froze
caught out by the sudden drop
crystallizing with fear
Other waters had cracked it
channelled a stream together
then glistened in the warmth of their company
Saved by the light curving away my shadow
nudged out of the thaw
to be swallowed by a growing stream
trickle to flow
flow to torrent
white water world to sea
You awoke cold, a shiver
a bead of sweat on your brow
feverishly rounding your nose
To the corner of the mouth, your estuary
tongue tasting
unveiling the past, lifting the life.
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This is way above me, but
This is way above me, but you know what, I really like it, how crazy is that! Nice work Hoalarg,
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