winter trees

Gold cherry
Poem of the week

By hoalarg1

Thu, 23 Nov 2023
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9 comments
 

Winter trees
I finally found you 
stripped to boned boughs
by nature's search for an answer
you're taller than you know
from shadows which outstretch December
and leaves, they cling at your heels - frosted
still too young to let you go

 

Certificate U
Poem
Rainbow World
Nature

Comments

Submitted by marandina on

That's a beautiful winter poem. Love the first 3 lines, in particular.

 

Submitted by Turlough on

A lovely poem.

This line chills and fits well with today...

stripped to boned boughs

Turlough

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

Nothing quite as beautifully bare as your pic and poem here yet hoalarg, but getting there!

 

Submitted by josiedog on

Yes. Caught perfectly and beautifully. Bleached to boned boughs.  Very evocative, as was it all.

Submitted by Di_Hard on

Hoalarg's striking poem "winter trees" is Pick of the Day! Please share if you can

 

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

Congratulations Hoalarg - very well deserved golden cherries!

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

A wonderful poem showing the art of winter trees.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by hoalarg1 on

Thanks for all of the comments and the cherries. I'm glad you like it.

 

Submitted by Ewan on

 Sparse, not a word wasted, that's why it's our Poem of the Week. Well done!

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