Sunrise
By isabba1
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Okay so I had to write an interesting paragraph on an interesting topic in English and I kinda like it so I thought I'd share and also get some feedback!!
Here goes. :)
Sunrise:
I must say a word about sunrise. It is the sign of a new beginning. Only sunrise can hold so much signifigance. It is a clean, blank slate, that I know. It is also manipulating, tiring, no mercy shown. It makes you feel like nothing will go wrong, forcing you to believe this. It starts in the sky, forever. First, it tricks you with it's looks, looking perfect, magnificent, fresh. Then sunrise, without a reason, grabs at you from the inside and laughs in your face. Shock wraps around you and shock tries to pretend it never happened. But pretending can only hold on for so long.
Shock flies away. You become full of horror. Strength comes to help you out. You hold your breath. Strength is big and powerful - just what you need. But surprisingly, strength does nothing but make you realize that today doesn't change yesterday. You feel yourself exhale - deep, heavy. Your horror becomes reality.
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An interesting and original
An interesting and original piece isabba. I realise this was an English assignment but for general consumption I think I might lose the first sentence and just go right in with : 'Sunrise is the sign.....'. Just a thought and you might not agree! This is a good write with strong images.
Linda
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