An End to a Means
By itsnotnatural
Sat, 09 Jun 2012
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It's fear has come true
There is nothing it can do
The Predictor has planted itself in the minds
Of many
The communications officer played with it once
He has never forgotten
The voluntary comatose state
He put himself in
To hide from what he thought was the truth
Then "they" came
The traitorous ones
The ones that live under the gun
He was told that there was a way out
He wondered what it was about
One said " come with me
And I'll set you free
But there must never be any doubt"
He was gone but for a moment
Where I do not know
But I presume
He is doing
What he was told
I do not blame him
Beware the turncoats
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These are well written, this
These are well written, this one and the last, but they are also frustrating me because I don't fully understand them. It's rare for me to comment on writing over story line or characters (even in a poem) but there's no doubt about it that they read very fluidly and you clearly know what you're doing.
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