Happiness/Ambition
By ItsSteveDave
Tue, 16 Oct 2012
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My friend, I’ve taken issue, won’t you listen?
This lush and fertile land that saw my birth,
Has trod a path which leads only to dearth,
Blurred; the shapes of happiness, ambition
And perpetually covetous, the mission
To force more jewels into your crown despite the weight;
Such a sparkling artefact of quite poor taste,
I pine to live life by my own volition.
I’m fed up of being led between two fences,
Directly to the smell of burning hair,
Love’s just an epithet for select breeding,
And glossy magazines numb all the senses,
A bitter allegory fills the air;
Something altogether different I am needing.
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Hi Stevedave, I had to read
Hi Stevedave, I had to read this about three or four times, there's so much in it.
Really enjoyed this.
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I like this a lot steve, i'm
I like this a lot steve, i'm starting to fall in love with the sonnet form - i've always been free verse with some rhyme etc but I love the the way sonnets challenge the writer (Or more precisely challenge me).Nice one
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Loved it, steve...and
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Loved it, steve...and sonnets are growing on me, too;-)
Tina
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Well you've managed it
Well you've managed it beautifully here Its!
Good luck with the competition by the way.
:D
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I was tempted to go in for
I was tempted to go in for it myself but knew that if I did I would get distracted from this short story I'm writing. I'm terrible at seeing projects through to completion so this time I am determined to finish it. Only two chapters left to go and one of those is finished - hooray.
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