No one comes here.
By Jane Hyphen
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No one comes here.
A sun rises each day
between the faded drapes.
And dust sparkles in the air,
There’s no gravity,
in this choked cell,
it is silent and stale.
Clocks go back and forth,
listening for something
beyond the bites of time.
Carpets flattened by the
footsteps on the moon.
Passengers on upper decks
stare upon the stagnancy.
There’s a sickly sort of comfort,
they breathe out as the wheels turn.
Mother’s things have watched
in cumulated shock, unending
nothings from their mantel shelf.
‘She’d have hated this,’ they say
in hushed whispers, resigned.
Wait until the dust settles.
Layers and layers of it,
homogenous and stifling.
And now nothing could move
inside this frozen pond.
Thick ice distorts the outside world.
There is only the comfort
of endless static reflections.
A hall of soured mirrors.
And it’s too late now,
a visitor would only shock
the portraits from the wall.
Cause the vases to jolt
in bashfulness, to crack.
Send the dustmites
scurrying in terror.
The seasons are enough.
Outside the filmy windows
change is constant and cruel.
Don’t let it in, no wind
shall stir this universe.
And nothing can leave,
except for when the little lamp
shines for days on end,
a dead man and his things.
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Comments
Very fine writing,
full of meaning and feeling.
I believe you have a typo at line 16 "breath" vice "breathe".
Powerful writing.
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Wonderful - a perfect pick.
Wonderful - a perfect pick. Thank you so much for posting this Jane
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This is today's Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day.
A marvellous and moving poem. Do please share and retweet if you like it too.
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You have framed a kind of sad
You have framed a kind of sad claustrophobia in a poignant, beautiful way, Jane. Congrats on the POTD.
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A powerful poem. Change will
A powerful poem. Change will come even to this place, but your lines leave much to ponder on while things are undisturbed.
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reading this makes my chest
reading this makes my chest tighten, just as scary today as reading yesterday
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too late now, too late (you
too late now, too late (you could get a booker, for that line alone).
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