Tuesday Sonnet: The Wisdom of the Old

By john_silver
Tue, 03 Feb 2009
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I know not of the wisdom of the old.
I do not even know who called it that:
Perhaps an old man, mumbling where he sat –
Which means it’s vanity. Or was it told
By someone who still walked the middle age?
But then does he not undermine his claim,
By saying wisdom’s deeper down his lane?
– Be as it may. It’s likely I’ll engage
With language better, with experience.
But then the only thing I really know,
This inner sunlight, precious and intense,
Will glow no more - like ashes lost in snow.
I guess this is how youth takes leave from hence;
Sung poorly, like first love, long days ago.
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Oh my God, that's blinking
Permalink Submitted by Geoff Smith on
Oh my God, that's blinking good!
But then does he not undermine his claim,
By saying wisdom’s deeper down his lane?
Not much can top that in its Larkinesque perfection.
This seems slightly more detached than some of your previous work, and is I think, all the better for it.
AMAZING!
JM
Thanks for reading. I am grateful for your time.
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Thank you for sharing this,
Permalink Submitted by lenchenelf on
Thank you for sharing this, atb L
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I think the poem is rather
I think the poem is rather grand and all I can say is, My Gosh, aren't you wise?'
Humbling,
J x
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