Angels write in poetry, Demons write in prose
By jonahs cough
Tue, 22 Feb 2011
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As I lie beneath the blanket
Of a heavy Devon sky
That has breached its secret contract
With the local weatherman
And begun to bleed
Cool drops of rain across Exeter,
My mind wanders off to unearthly things,
I imagine Heaven and Hell,
Heaven where the saints and angels
Move through gardens
Rich with tame animals and wildflowers,
And sit in all their joy
Writing spinning lines of poetry
More beautiful than they, the poets, themselves,
And Hell where demons and sinners
Are locked in constant torture,
In windowless rooms,
The demons bored of the dark
The sinners terrified by it,
And there they stay, strewn across broad floors
Writing unending and uncomfortable blocks of prose
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I like the idea of the
I like the idea of the damned being punished by having to write endless prose - these lines are very good:
And there they stay, strewn across broad floors
Writing unending and uncomfortable blocks of prose
Well done :-)
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I struggle to write prose at
I struggle to write prose at all so am in full agreement with you. :-)
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Very clever, this, Jonah. I
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Very clever, this, Jonah. I too can identify. Prose is something I 'do' from time to time...I look on it a bit like 'taking a laxative', as and when the need arises;-)
Admire these lines especially:-
"The demons bored of the dark
The sinners terrified by it..."
Enjoyed.
Tina
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Love this, Jonah. I rarely
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
Love this, Jonah. I rarely post prose on here and share your discomfort - this is a brilliant way of looking at it!
Also, I see you're a student at Exeter - I have a lot of friends at Exeter uni, you wouldn't happen to know David Machin (History and German) or Elliot Gray-Clough (Law) would you?
Magic xxx
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I'm struggling to write
I'm struggling to write prose at the moment :] So I feel the pain and discomfort. I really enjoyed this :)
Beeme xx
k.
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