Caffeine Dreams
By JoseHdz
Fri, 03 Jun 2011
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"I saw that my life was a vast glowing empty page and I could do anything I wanted."
-Jack Kerouac; The Dharma Bums.
Whenever you are in
Need of release
Turn to the
Blank page
And exist
Like the light
In your room
At 4:30 AM
F l i c k e r i n g
Let the words
D
R
I
P
From the page
Like an
Abstract expressionist
Painting;
Following and listening:
Splash!
Let the thoughts
Bounce off the walls
Of the winter sunset
M I N D:
Like caffeine dreams
And stardust nicotine.
Next;
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I also liked this, very
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
I also liked this, very original.
Jenny.
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wow, this is one of my
wow, this is one of my favourites of yours Jose. i really enjoyed.'stardust nicotine.' what a brilliant phrase! your poetry is always so impressive :)
Beeme xx
k.
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Fantastic, this, Jose. You
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Fantastic, this, Jose. You go from strength to strength;-)
Tina
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new JoseHdz I say the same
Permalink Submitted by Cavalcader on
new JoseHdz
I say the same as other's great.
and last two lines
Like caffeine dreams
and stardust nicotine.
well deserved cherry
keep writing more.
julie x
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Jose, I really like the
Jose, I really like the lines Julie pointed out as well. This has so much going on for so few words. Truly impressive!
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I'd be pleased if you'd take
I'd be pleased if you'd take a look at my latest effort 'Mere' and give me your considered opinion.
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