From Me to You

By JoseHdz

Sat, 26 Feb 2011

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12 comments

Sometimes I
Write you poems
And daydream
About sending them
To you

Wishfully
I conspire that
These poems
Will teach you
The extent
To which I care for you
The degree
To which I need you

Intricately
I imagine
Reading these poems
To you
With some light jazz
In the background
Kissing you softly
On the neck
As a couple of
Tears form and fall

I don't know what
I like more
You
Or writing these
Poems about you

Certificate U

Love

Comments

Yes, very true - the last

Permalink Submitted by rjnewlyn on Sat, 2011-02-26 00:53

Yes, very true - the last part. Hard to tell why we write ... Rob

Glad it rang true,

Permalink Submitted by JoseHdz on Sat, 2011-02-26 01:43

Glad it rang true, Rob. thanks ABC for the cherries! cheers, jose.

Lovely last verse in

Permalink Submitted by seashore on Sat, 2011-02-26 02:23

Lovely last verse in particular, jose.

cheers, seashore. thanks for

Permalink Submitted by JoseHdz on Sat, 2011-02-26 02:37

cheers, seashore. thanks for reading. jose.

The whole piece is really

Permalink Submitted by Dynamaso on Sat, 2011-02-26 06:16

The whole piece is really good but the last stanza is prefect.

thank you, Dynamaso. I

Permalink Submitted by JoseHdz on Sat, 2011-02-26 06:55

thank you, Dynamaso. I actually started off with the last stanza and wrote the rest of the poem, accordingly. glad you liked it, cheers, jose.

totally agree with all the

Permalink Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on Sat, 2011-02-26 09:11

totally agree with all the others -the last stanza is brilliant

thank you, poncey. the last

Permalink Submitted by JoseHdz on Sat, 2011-02-26 15:14

thank you, poncey. the last stanza really does puzzle me :) cheers, jose.

I agree with the above, a

Permalink Submitted by Beeme on Sat, 2011-02-26 20:45

I agree with the above, a brillant poem. Especially the last stanza :) Beeme xx

glad you enjoyed this one.

Permalink Submitted by JoseHdz on Sat, 2011-02-26 21:04

glad you enjoyed this one. cheers, Beeme :) jose.

You have a way, Jose, of

Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on Sun, 2011-02-27 08:51

You have a way, Jose, of using everyday thoughts, and everyday words, mixing them all together and turning them into the most complexly simple poetry I have read in a long time. Not sure if this makes any sense at all...but your poems sure do. Brilliant! Tina;-)

thank you very much, Tina.

Permalink Submitted by JoseHdz on Mon, 2011-02-28 03:10

thank you very much, Tina. Yes, your comment does make sense and I appreciate it very much. I especially enjoy your comment because I feel you adequately explain what I try to achieve in my poems. thanks again :) cheers, jose.