False Sight

By juicy-lucy

Thu, 17 Dec 2009
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Turn off the light.
For too many days, your
Eyes have been met with
Dull explosions.

Close your eyes.
Instead, listen your way
Around this broken
Photoframe house.

Stand still.
Once you’ve
Found what you are
Looking for.
You may be walking
For some time

Keep your eyes
Closed.
To open them would be
To shatter the
Corporate sand.

Certificate U
Miscellaneous

Comments

Submitted by tcook on
I really liked this until the last line - corporate sand' just doesn't seem to fit. Are you sure that's what you want to say? Maybe I've got the whole thing upside down.