cigarettes at dawn for the poetry group
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By JupiterMoon
Wed, 29 Aug 2012
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cigarettes at dawn for the poetry group
the problem with writers,
is that
they are not as interested
in each other’s work,
as they claim
to be.
for beneath the polite
‘ooohs’ and ‘aaahs’
and the ‘yeah, yeah, i see’
a secret heart,
beats back and forth
with a litany,
of ‘me, me,
me, me, ME.’
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I think your poems could use
I think your poems could use some capital letters here and there.
But other than that, I really liked this, such a very true observation. A gritty little life-snippet.
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Very well done. I like this
Permalink Submitted by Jessiibear on
Very well done. I like this a lot.
Jess
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Nice piece. Yup, writers and
Permalink Submitted by The Walrus on
Nice piece. Yup, writers and other artists are very selfish indeed, and I'm the most selfish bastard of them all, but on a mutually inspiring and nurturing site like this they help each other much more than anyone would expect. Symbiosis, I believe the term is.
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'Cigarettes at dawn' - love
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
'Cigarettes at dawn' - love it! This one really made me smile and you're right, of course ;-) Brilliant poem!
Magic xxx
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Very true for actors as well!
Very true for actors as well! I really like this poem.
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