family photograph
By JupiterMoon
Tue, 05 Jun 2012
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family photograph
it might never be better
than this:
the close shouldered
assembly line smile,
forced against a sea
blue background.
neither of you
can work the camera.
instead you bicker over
who knows the least.
two round boys
clog themselves to the eyes
with vinegary chips.
one has the resigned face of his mother.
the other
an awkward way of speaking.
a worthless gift
from a y-chromosome.
you build frantic
lumped castles
from the shingle,
and the soft
slithering sea
rushes in.
rinsing your hopes away.
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Stunning. Such a powerful
Permalink Submitted by maggyvaneijk on
Stunning. Such a powerful opening.
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new cavalcaderl
Permalink Submitted by Cavalcader on
new cavalcaderl julie
Enjoyed this very much JupiterMoon.
Thanks. Well deserved cherries!
Ah! what photographs tell.
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Can't quote a single line,
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
Can't quote a single line, JM, because I love it all! Brilliant from start to finish :-)
Magic xxx
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