On a bus.
By Katherine1256
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On a bus.
Hands paralyzed in your lap,
In your body you are stuck.
‘Move away’ your mind is screaming,
‘its not real I am just dreaming’.
Clouds are gathering around,
You are lost, cannot be found.
One, two, three, count to ten.
Four, five, six, and this when
Seven, eight you realize,
Nine, ten.
You’ll have to compromise.
This is your reality,
A life with such brutality.
You think everything is fake,
But remember things still break,
This is not a race of ache,
Very soon, you’ll be awake.
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Welcome to ABCTales Katherine
Welcome to ABCTales Katherine - this piece is a good start. If you're looking for suggestions, I'm not sure 'ache' is quite the word you're looking for in the penultimate line
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Enjoyed reading this. Dreams
Enjoyed reading this. Dreams produce memorable poems. That paralysed feeling is horrible. Nicely depicted.
Parson Thru
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