The Little Things.

By kristen-ann

Sat, 13 Jun 2009
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You talk way too much.
I laugh way too loud.
Your jokes are obscene.
My thoughts insane.
I hate the way you lie.
You hate what I yearn for.

It's the little things.
People seem to see.
The things you notice.
In a human being.

I love it when you're happy.
The way you put your arm around me.
Beg me to go just to get a moment alone.
All your stories you tell.
How you embrace me at night.
And hold my hand tight.

It's easier to breathe.
Without so much worry in reach.
Positive:
Is the best way to see.

Certificate U
Poem
Poetry : ).
Love

Comments

Submitted by Ewan on
It should be: I love it when you're happy. You can't have 'much worries' if you put the singular instead, you will not change syllable count or stress,Ok? There is a nice understatement about this one. Ewan

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Submitted by kristen-ann on
Well thank you : ). I didn't even notice that. : ).

Submitted by Jupiter on
I like the honesty of this piece although I'm a little unsure about the meaning of the last two lines ;-) Anyway, just wanted to let you know that I enjoyed it. Thanks. :-)

Submitted by kristen-ann on
well the last two lines, it just means that i always like to keep thinking positive. i think that's the best outlook on life. even when everything's going wrong. it keeps me going in life : ). and don't thank me, thank you. : ). for even reading this, haha.