the pain of love
By kuno-chan
Mon, 17 Aug 2009
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Tears fall
Sweet yet bitter
He walks away
To deceive another.
Lying to me saying
He is sad he ignores me,
When really he just
Wants a promised girl
She hates him
He doesn’t care.
Pushing into her life
She pushes back
Making him upset
He comes close to tears
My heart full of joy
Yet…..sad for his pain
I don’t want him sad
Mad or upset,
Its easier to be happy
When he is just himself
I miss linking fingers
Holding hands so tight
Dancing together
His hand on my back
And still around my heart
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new kuno-chan Does one good
Permalink Submitted by Cavalcader on
new kuno-chan
Does one good be able to
put it into poem.
You have expressed it well.
Line I like last verse.
I miss linking fingers!
holding hands so tight
dancing to-gether
his hand on my back
and still aroung my heart.
julie cavalcader (:-
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I agree with Cavalcaderl.
Permalink Submitted by Dan-The-Man on
I agree with Cavalcaderl. Shows deep thinking in the word "love" that is, I feel, misused in modern society.
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there is no sharper blade in
Permalink Submitted by darkenwolf on
there is no sharper blade in life than love -it brings everlasting hope and inflicts wounds that never truly heal. Funny that no matter how bad they've treated you you still miss them.
Great poem
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