the pond
By leeboy87
Mon, 16 Nov 2009
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i'm sitting here all alone
not a soul around
i wonder, and wonder
with no sign, nor sound
feeling trapped
closed in
all i do
is flap and swim
from one reed
to another
in search
of a brother
finally one day
a floating worm
made me feel
the tide has turned
i ponder closer
for a curious look
only to be fooled
it's really a hook!
i swim as hard as i can
only its too late
the hook sunk in
and sealed my fate
a dream come true
short and sweet
i'm out the pond
i wish i had feet
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Hello Richard , I hope your
Permalink Submitted by Lady-Bathsheba on
Hello Richard , I hope your not corrupting him with your crazy mind!!!
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Sorry forgot to say "Hi"
Permalink Submitted by Lady-Bathsheba on
Sorry forgot to say "Hi" to new neighbour as well
Hope your all settled in ok.
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brilliant idea like the feet
Permalink Submitted by richielee70 on
brilliant idea like the feet at the end , good work lee
roger higginbottom
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luv your poem, its not until
luv your poem, its not until the very last line (see the pun) where you realize its about a fish. Nicely done =-)
Bea :-)
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