His Dilemma

By Lem

Wed, 30 Jun 2010
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Compelled to decide
To make clear my desire
Which way do I turn?
To cool water, or fire?
Water may freeze and fierce flame die
And in between, elements’ captive, am I.

Compelled now to tell her
Who I would choose
Though gaining through choosing
I know I’ll still lose.
Should I turn from temptation, to memories stay true?
Should I spurn the sad past and just embrace the new?

How do you choose between summer and spring?
How can you choose when you love everything?

Certificate U
The Blessed Four Of Rai-Stirigon
Fantasy

Comments

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
good luck with you novel Lem!

 

Submitted by Lem on
Thanks! :)Usually I begin writing and end up abandoning it, but this one seems to be going well.

Submitted by Kahdai on
Yay go on Lem! :)

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "

Submitted by h jenkins on
I think this is very good. I think the scansion could be tidied up a little but the last two lines are simply lovely. Helvigo Jenkins

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