Western Harbour
By lenchenelf
Mon, 03 Sep 2012
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Old maids bob and curtsey on the lap of waves
calmed in this quieted chapel.
They have seen the wrath of open court,
danced a jig to storm, a gust
wailed skirl through rig and sail.
Skittish still, through peeling paint
they may recall argent shoals snagged
in their wifey skirt of corded lace,
trailed to scoop a benison,
spent accordingly.
Tacked together, a battle-scarred hymn
of patchwork skin furrows land and brow,
tamed to tastes, enclosure of minds to feed
a nation.
My eye roves to blackened Sage, height and age
respected by kiss of mist and soft footfall;
head raised to catch the weep of heaven,
tears to replenish our dwindling pool.
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I think this is wonderful.
I think this is wonderful. Like a lesson on how to write a poem. And it sounds lovely read aloud
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This is great Lena - and
This is great Lena - and glad I found it. Read it a few times and accordingly jars a bit for me but I'm usually wrong about these things. You do nice fings wif words an I like it. :-)
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I told you I was usually
I told you I was usually wrong about these things lena - whatever you tweak, don't tweak accordingly. ;-)
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moonphish - that is
moonphish - that is lovely....what a wondrous tapestry of words you have woven
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