FRAMED
By Linda Wigzell Cress
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There is a picture in a silver frame -
My Grandparents on their wedding day;
And a metal box with water stains
That still retains the pungent smell
Of a full pack of strong tobacco
And a crumpled box of fags as well -
With just one empty space.
‘It would’ve been rude as anything
Not to try a gift from the daughter of the King’
With a small wry smile Grandad would say,
Looking at the picture of the Princess Royal’s face,
Safe at home in Blighty.
There used to be a pencil too
With a bullet casing lid –
That went missing long ago.
And, this I do not really know,
But I like to think he used it up
On cards and notes to his new wife –
In his pocket safely hid;
Perhaps it stopped a shot one night,
Which may have saved his life.
Like the three times the surgeons did -
Then sent him to the front again to fight.
Theres’s a little leather bag –
The cut-off tip of a soldier’s glove.
And here inside, a metal lump
The size of marbles, coloured glass
They used to play with in the trench
By way of fun, in all that mud and deathly stench.
‘The surgeon took it from my head.
It’s shrapnel, a gift sent by the Hun,
That and the cough from the mustard gas.
I’ve kept that too, wherever I go in this fair land.
But they wouldn’t let me keep my Lewis gun!’
I looked confused; he patted my hand:
‘It’s right you shouldn’t understand.
That’s what I fought for’ Grandad said.
The pale young soldier and his bride
Gaze shyly from the picture in the frame
Now man and wife at last, and side by side;
So full of tender hopes and love and fears.
And with them I pray we’ve done with war at last
Now one hundred bloody years have passed.
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Hi Linda.
Hi Linda.
This is so moving. You have really brought home the reality, and the picture is beautiful - I couldn't stop looking at it. He is just a boy, but the look in their faces tells how everyone must have been feeling at that time. Love your poem.
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Carefully and helpfully
Carefully and helpfully informative again, in a gentle narrative, biographical and personal context, Linda. The work involved appreciated, Rhiannon
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Linda, a snapshot of war and
Linda, a snapshot of war and a generation, lovingly told. Good luck with your poem.
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You've captured so much in
You've captured so much in this poem Linda. Looking at the photo I can understand why you needed to get this poem down...it all needed to be said and you wrote it in such a sensitive manner.
Well done.
Jenny.
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A lovely read - you made the
A lovely read - you made the 100 gone years personal and moving
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Another good poem, Linda,
Another good poem, Linda,
One to savour I think. Your poetry just gets better and better.
Moya
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Hello Linda.
Hello Linda.
A sad read and the photo captures that I think '...The pale young soldier and his bride...' as many never returned
'...Will mankind never learn?... your reply to Jenny rings so true, I doubt very much will chage
regards
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HI Linda, It's me at last.
HI Linda, It's me at last. This is so strong and moving. A most enjoyable read but at the end of it all the world is still a very sad place. When will mankind ever learn Love instead of War. Not in the last 100 years we see. Roy
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This is a really great poem
This is a really great poem to read, I can just imagine it all in my head.
Glad this got cherries, well done.
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