genesis
By lithiviaoblivia
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sixty thousand stars form the shape of a mouth, it speaks and there are days
that turn to weeks; a cosmic carpet of them, unrolling spherically into
these months that have become years
since time first trickled in through the living leaves
and what is bliss, woman wonders, without its opposite
what is its opposite
why
each balmy dusk Eve sits with the centermost tree, asks it in whispers how long have i been waiting? what fear keeps me here awake at night?
what is fear?
this eve she hunts down Adam, her pupils ablaze
in her hand, an open fruit slavering like wombflesh
bloody juice all up her forearm
guilty lipstick
talking talking
she presses the drippy quince into Adam’s palm
in love, he eats of it
knowledge is tart and sharp going down
Serpent murmurs like television inside the distant distance
Adam holds his bride
on the garden’s perfect floor; v’s humanity opens up in her, painful as pried petals,
fills her with a vacuum so loud it is bright, still
Adam holds her in fear as her body squeezes out of his and locks up tightly around her
her eyes melt and regenerate / melt and regenerate / by the heat of the light beyond the gates
with knocker snarling in branding-iron orange, they open
bidden
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A very rich use of language, and a fascinating retelling of the myth. The 'bloody juice all up her forearm/guilty lipstick' was such a striking image. Such interesting work - looking forward to reading more!
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So glad you're posting here -
So glad you're posting here - your poetry is simply the best. This poem is celestial, transcendental, horrific, salvatory and damned all at once, and most of all humbling. It takes a while to unlock your poems, but that's not for lack of clarity; it's only because you've compressed everything so far that every line makes an important movement. I think you'll be read a long time from now, particularly when one can hold a book of your poems and see how they're all interconnected.
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