Loving the Potter
By littleditty
Tue, 24 Mar 2009
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Loving she who takes the clay
deep from the mine and looms
great clods into fine porcelain cloth
for lace petal cups; her own delight,
and mine, to see her bloom.
This weave of sheer reflective glaze
is tapestry; if fired too long,
or cooled to quickly,
the loved up clay is doomed.
Twice fired, twice cooled; timing,
and sharing precious sips.
Mistiming,
and I arrange flowers in a cracked vase,
sweep broken tears and china chips
into the basket of my arms.
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I love the last stanza ld!
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
I love the last stanza ld! Such intricate, exquisite imagery. Well done :)
Magic xxx
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Lovely evocative piece
Permalink Submitted by threeleafshamrock on
Lovely evocative piece LD.
Chris X
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ld - a beauty! And the poem,
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
ld - a beauty! And the poem, of course:-) Seriously though, evocative as Chris says. Another one of my faves.
Tina xx
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Just goes to show how
Just goes to show how important a title is (as I've always maintained). Clicked on this in the 'latest' list precisely because of this (title - and not knowing it was you, Nicky), and most certainly wasn't disappointed!
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There is something of the
There is something of the Romantics in this - the phrasing perhaps. Publishable.
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