Rock Pools Haiku

By littleditty

Mon, 22 Jun 2020
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 Rough diamond geysers

Sweet rock pools to salty edge

 Breakfast with eagles

 

 

 

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Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Nice word picture! Sometimes writing something concise takes longer to sort out!

Were there reallly geysers there? Rhiannon

 

Submitted by littleditty on

eagle, and the diamond geezers, and the not so diamond ones too! Slang for man. Thanks for reading and commenting :)

 

Submitted by Parson Thru on

I lived in Stratford for a year (before the Olympics), then Ilford, then Arnos Grove neck of the woods. All three lines work for me.

Parson Thru

Submitted by littleditty on

and wonder what you meant -Anos fucking Grove!!!! LOL. Friern Barnet mate -now: LAUGH!

 

Submitted by Parson Thru on

You're in Friern Barnet? You're kidding. Oakleigh Crescent once upon a time.

Parson Thru

Submitted by littleditty on

and Oakleigh Crescent. Friends there. And Whetstone.. Friern Barnet, used to be a Town Hall, down high street two roads from friern barnet lane, cant remember the name of the road, I lived thre for a while too...and by Friary Park, was hatched there! And East Barnet, quite a lot of homes there too!

 

Submitted by Parson Thru on

You just made me really homesick for yet another home. X

Parson Thru

Submitted by littleditty on

highly recommended - for breaks, or living...get a tub! :)

 

Submitted by Parson Thru on

Opposite Ken's Chinese.

Parson Thru

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Submitted by Parson Thru on

Little parade of shops if you took the bus from Whetstone to Arnos Grove.

Parson Thru

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Submitted by Nolan on

The force that drives the water

through the rocks

drives my red blood.

- Dylan Thomas

 

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