Snake
By littleditty
Thu, 27 Apr 2006
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Condemned to be a belly on the earth,
you slither masterfully
around the beehive, away from
the beating of bamboo sticks,
riding the air in a ripple of desert sand.
In the whoop and holler of discovery,
lengths hypnotize,
unraveling waves of dancing feet
in a strike, a miss, and retreat.
Later, I wonder of your bite,
hidden in tall grass, quiet.
A toothless face on the fence
skirting immunity, or else
beautifully venomous,
contemplating legs, hips;
no footsteps, no trace,
just movement, honey,
and the lick of escaping lips.
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This is wonderful, ld. Just
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
This is wonderful, ld. Just noticed you were 'logged in' and thought I'd catch up on your doodlings.
"...contemplating legs, hips;
no footsteps, no trace,
just movement, honey,
and the lick of escaping lips."
Sorry I missed this one, way back when, but glad I found it now.
Hope life is treating you well;-)
Tina xxx
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