In An Old Cathedral
By loquaciousicity
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She knelt upon a plank, plain oaken
(sable cloak, her mourning guise),
and sensed the breath of distant sighs,
pale shades of pain behind blue eyes…
While clasping close a cross-like token
(holding hope for those in need)
she prayed her Lord "please intercede,
my woes be washed, my soul be freed"…
Archangels, in the skies evoken
(candles flickered, shadows shivered),
through the panes, the moonlight quivered,
summoned forth, the wish delivered…
Forgotten words he once had spoken
(dimly echoed ’neath the dome)
swept sweetness of the honeycomb
o'er distant realms they used to roam…
At midnight's knell, in dreams awoken,
memories of love unfeigned…
Though loneliness of grief remained,
she still held hope… hope hadn't waned…
And when the dawn had early broken,
by the font, in peace, she lay…
As sudden as a sunset ray,
the light of life had slipped away…
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Very artistic, painting, or
Very artistic, painting, or maybe sculpture came to mind.
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Hi Terry.
You paint a very vivid picture. The Cathedral, cold and dark. ( shadows shivered
through the panes) The girl lying by the font, the purifying holy water,no help at all.
Unless of course she has been reunited with her lost love.
I really enjoyed this Terry.
The imagery and emotion were marvellous.
Weefatfella.
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