August Rain
By Louise178
Thu, 19 Aug 2010
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August rain, middle
season, mixed up
sky of weather
dampest drizzle
of chilled wet air
beating autumn time
with dullest
pitter patter
two four, four four
in slowest largo tempo.
But it's much too early
autumn you are premature
we are not ready
for hats, boots, macs
and cardigans,
where was our
August summer time
of stripey deckchairs
marigolds, pansies
colourful parasols
lemonade and
ice lollies.
August rain, middle
season, mixed up
sky of weather
how I wish
we weren't stuck with you.
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I am in total agreement. You
I am in total agreement. You may be in England but I am stuck with this in Denmark. We have had sooo much rain this August that it breaks all records and that is according to the Met!
Nice piece by the way
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maybe one is weightless in
maybe one is weightless in water but you don't have to think your poem was weak- it was a moments atmosphere. I thought it was expressionist. There, hope that makes you feel better ;)
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'largo tempo' - such a
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'largo tempo' - such a lovely image, Louise! And I completely agree with the poem's sentiments ;)
Magic xxx
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are you sure you aren't in
are you sure you aren't in utah. cuz that is how it feels out here too.
----Kuno-Chan----
----Kuno-Chan----
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