Bare bones

Thanks for the cherry :) sorry it made you shiver ! It's meant to be a play on words aswell, as there aren't many words - a poem stripped to the bone.

Louise

I love this, Louise, bleak

Permalink Submitted by TREVOR MAYTUM on Thu, 2010-12-02 19:14

I love this, Louise, bleak imagery. I felt it too. trev

Nice work, Louise. I really

Permalink Submitted by TVR on Thu, 2010-12-02 19:28

Nice work, Louise. I really liked it. Cherries well-deserved. sue

TVR

Thanks trev, just looked at

Permalink Submitted by Louise178 on Thu, 2010-12-02 19:37

Thanks trev, just looked at your latest, love the way you have set it out, it's cool isn't it, it's my sort of thing :) thanks Sue thought you both should've got cherries really, but it's not up to me :(

Louise

well done. salud..

Permalink Submitted by JoseHdz on Thu, 2010-12-02 22:47

well done. salud..

Thanks Jose.

Permalink Submitted by Louise178 on Fri, 2010-12-03 13:58

Thanks Jose.

Louise

'no warmth or

Permalink Submitted by fatboy74 on Mon, 2010-12-13 02:24

'no warmth or gentleness just strange bleak cold morbidity.' Oddly beautiful. :-)

Like me slightly odd ! :)

Permalink Submitted by Louise178 on Mon, 2010-12-13 08:57

Like me slightly odd ! :)

Louise

Bare bones

By Louise178

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another beautifully written

Thanks for the cherry :)

I love this, Louise, bleak

Nice work, Louise. I really

Thanks trev, just looked at

well done. salud..

Thanks Jose.

'no warmth or

Like me slightly odd ! :)

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