The Great unfinished Poem of self discovery.

By lovegod

Fri, 18 Sep 2009
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The Great unfinished Poem of self discovery.

I am . . .
the source of the love that nourishes me.
The source of, my own Spring.

I am the adult; the child in me needed too look to.
Here is the grace and Love we all seek.

I am the Love!
The parent, to the unanswered cries of youth.

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Poem
Autobiography

Comments

Submitted by Mangone on
An interesting poem! I find that I am sustained by that which I cannot identify but is not of me. Like sunshine it is always present but some days it is diffused as though through cloud. It inspires in me a warmth, joy and sense of wonder that transports me to a Paradise where even the box monkeys - and their ceaseless attempt to transform everything outside their boxes into either a tip, a telephone box or a beer garden - are almost loveable.

Submitted by Cavalcader on
New lovegod I like this one. lines. I am the Love! The parent,to the Unanswered cries of youth. julie cavalcader.

Submitted by lovegod on
Thank you for your kind words of comment, on a poem that practically wrote itself. It's an usual joy to know how many of you have read it. It's the first Poem I've put forward, so it's somewhat rewarding to know some of you liked it. Many thanks.

Submitted by Mangone on
I originally thought that's what you meant lovegod but I was confused by 'The source of, my own Spring.' which is why I posted what I did. I suppose the difference between God and Buddha is that we are all Buddha nature but only God is God. In the end it makes little difference perhaps as your eyes grow to swallow you whole :O)