The Buzzing In My Head
By luigi_pagano
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I have this bee in my bonnet:
to write in praise of romance;
of the feeling that burgeons
from a timid, amorous glance
into an enduring love affair.
I’m not averse to do it in verse,
a ballad, perhaps, or a sonnet.
But not in the classical style
of Byron, Shelley, Shakespeare,
but a more common parlance.
I want the dialogue to appear
conversational and simple
between two shy youngsters
who see the moon as a symbol
of a strong, magnetic, attraction.
My head is awash with ideas,
buzzing like the eponymous bee
but the inspiration is a blur
in the maze of my hazy brain.
Yet that’s how creating occurs.
© Luigi Pagano 2016
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Yes Luigi,
Yes Luigi,
Oh! For falling in love, that first big dip into the magnetic force between two lovers that can't bare to be apart.
Creative poem indeed.
Jenny. xx
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'. . . in the maze of my hazy
'. . . in the maze of my hazy brain,' spoke to me, Luigi. Ah, love. Wonderful to read this on a quiet Sunday morning with coffee. Lovely.
Rich
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Enjoyed the scattering of
Enjoyed the scattering of rhymes and zzzs! Rhiannon
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