An Invitation

Cherry

By luigi_pagano

Sat, 09 Dec 2017
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8 comments
 
I got an invite to a party
from Richard and Sue,
two people I knew
to be arty-farty.
 
It was clear by their hint
they expected coke;
I could say I was skint
or that I was broke
 
but if I didn’t comply
there might be a riot
so I went out to buy
a coke that was diet.
 
They couldn’t accept
I’d dashed their hope
so both of them wept
for the lack of dope.
 
© Luigi Pagano 2017
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Comments

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

A neat humorous take. I could see it coming, but it was well worked out, crisp verse. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by luigi_pagano on

Yes I know, Rhiannon, it is a simple, and hopefully entertaining, little ditty written mainly for my own amusement but also to keep my brain in gear. In these days of doom and gloom a bit of light relief is needed.

Luigi x

 

Submitted by Parson Thru on

:)

Parson Thru

Submitted by luigi_pagano on

wink

 

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

I missed this one Luigi - as Rhiannon says, a nice, crisp little poem. Very funny too!

 

Submitted by luigi_pagano on

What a lovely surprise. Many thanks to you and Rhiannon for the comment that arose your curiosity.

Luigi x

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Just found this poem Luigi, gave me a smile. smiley

Jenny. xx

 

Submitted by luigi_pagano on

So glad to hear it, Jenny. Thanks.

Luigi xx