Haiku-1
By Basket case
Tue, 10 Feb 2015
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Sad soul was wailing,
in the quiet dusky night,
darkness was laughing.
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Love the change of tone.
Permalink Submitted by Philip Sidney on
Love the change of tone.
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In so few words, this sets up
Permalink Submitted by Parson Thru on
In so few words, this sets up and entire scene and emotion.
Parson Thru
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really good, conveying a lot
Permalink Submitted by rosaliekempthorne on
really good, conveying a lot of emotion, and nicely contained inside the haiku structure.
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