Discretion

By thanksfortheparakeets@gmail.com

Sun, 12 Aug 2012
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7 comments
 

Your secrets, your confessions
are dark crystals
slipping quietly
into my ocean
glinting deep
green
heavy they rest
on the sea bed
hidden
inside
silent
forever.

Certificate U
Style vs Substance
Love

Comments

Submitted by Sooz006 on
This is full of subversive sexual connotation ... lovely.

 

Submitted by thanksforthepar... on
oh, yes, so it is...I never noticed that before, tee hee ;)

 

Submitted by ScoZen on
Ahh little Janner. Could this ere be a tale from the Swilly? Regards ps I really need to read more of your tales.
ScoZen

Submitted by thanksforthepar... on
Ere I be Stonehouse all the way innit, mate, innit :)

 

Submitted by TVR on
Succinct and beautiful, Marion. Trev

TVR

Submitted by moonphish on
what a beautifully dark little wonder of a poem this is - alvin

Submitted by VeraClark on

Another gem.