The phone
By martin_t
Tue, 16 Sep 2008
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the phone lays silent
on a pub table
in the shadow of the pint
protecting it
embracing it
yet it remains
stubbornly silent
taunting me with
inactivity
teasing me
it's taking the piss
to be honest
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love it - tight, punchy and
love it - tight, punchy and so effective in illustrating that sense of being alone/loneliness. Margot
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