rough draft first chapter
By matsuiny2004
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The hero(nsme) was driving through the city streets, his parents were in the back seat. They chose the back so they could feel closer to each other. the hero looked in the rearview camera feed and while seeing their faces he said "heres your stop" his parents got out of the hovering vehicle shaped like a triangle with its surface facing the ground and walked to the building (name) as the hero waved good bye his parents turned around and..........they were frozen in time. He went to check on his parents, but he looked around and after tripping on the foot of a person looked in front of him...it was his parents. "Oh my god!!!" said the hero, his heart racing so loud he could hear it. The hero woke up his pupils dialated. he slowly calmed down "what a terrible night" he said. he oriented himslef to his environment. Music was playing. He tapped his temple. the music stopped. he stood up and walked towards the door looking at his pink magnetical, it's body was held together although none of its parts were connected. the parts floated above each other its head pulling along all the parts with it. He walked towards it and gave it some food it swam around happily as electricity shot towards its brain. he closed the door on his way out. While he was walking on the sidewalk two men jumped up in front of him. Give me your money said the hooded people. Their voices were deep. “One shot and this will vaporize you.” They grabbed his arm and used a machine to extract all the money that was on the heroes device. “goddammit!, that was a weeks pay!” he yelled as the hooded people ran. “what a terrible day first I have a nightmare about my parents death, then I get robbed” he thought. “today is not a day I feel like having a sense of humor, If my parents had not died two months ago in a terrorist attack I would be able to go college and have a job. you know a nice life. I wish I knew why my parents died what they died for, if I could I would protect people from these threats” the hero said to himself. He went to work “another boring day cleaning the stalls at a terrible restraunt”. He thought. At his break time he ate and read some articles about scientific discoveries on his palm screen. “At least I can do one thing I like doing” he thought. When looking at his hand he read an article about an experiment that would turn its volunteer into a weapon against terrorism. “the people that kill innocent people could be stopped like fly paper stops a fly!” the hero thought. “time to get back to work, I don’t pay you to read that stuff” said his boss. Hero sat in front of the wall as screen shaped itself from liquid that moved around on the walls.
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"heres your stop" ...
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I was interested when I
I've got a plan so cunning you could brush your teeth with it!
-Edmund Blackadder, Blackadder II
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