Forgotten Stranger
By mcscraic
Sun, 03 Dec 2017
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Forgotten Stranger
by Paul McCann
You’ve become the stranger
so far away from me .
It seems I disappear ,
how I wish you could see .
I love you .
I need you .
You mean the world to me .
I don’t know what to do .
I’m lonely as can be .
Living like a stranger
I choose to live that way
Love never comes round here
to see me anyway .
So I’ll wait for you here ,
looking in the darkness .
I’m another stranger .
Loving in your absence .
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Describes a horrible feeling
Permalink Submitted by Parson Thru on
Describes a horrible feeling very well, Paul.
There's a rogue apostrophe in comes.
Nicely written.
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Thank you. Good to pass
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Thank you. Good to pass smiles around. Thanks for returning the favour.
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