All In White

By Miss Beazly

Mon, 11 Feb 2008
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The first time you walked with me in your arms down the aisle to be Baptism, you whispered
to me, Baby you are my Beautiful Angel All In White.

As a couple of years pass by an it was time for me to make my First Communion, you held my
little hands tight as we walked down the aisle and you whispered to me, you are my Beautiful
Little Girl All In White.

When it was time for me to make my Confirmation, you kwon that I was scared so you reached
out for my hand as we walked down the aisle, you whispered to me, you are my Beautiful Princess
All In White.

Then it was time for me to get Married, shaking as we walked down the aisle you held my arm so
close for me not to fall, then you whispered to me, you are my Beautiful Queen All In White.

Two years later you passed away, not knowning that the time has pass so fast, crying an wondering
why, then you came by my side calling my name so I lift up my head trying to see you, but the only
thing I could have said was, Daddy now you are my King All In White.

Certificate PG
Poem
Spiritual

Comments

Submitted by Sooz006 on
Bad bit first, this one needs a good edit. I can see that you wrote it really quickly. But that's nothing. What a lovely, lovely piece. Very pretty.

 

Submitted by Miss Beazly on
Well thank you for your comment and I do believe I need some help in writing it better, so if you can help me put it in another way it would really help me explain why all in white.