Donnian
By MistakenMagic
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"For I am every dead thing
In whom Love wrought new alchemy."
- John Donne
... And we are the amateur alchemists,
seeking help from greater poets -
the better chemics. Researching
at a distance, we are two intelligences
in separate spheres.
Well... Actually, we're still just two school kids,
exchanging notes under the table in class.
Or, maybe, a couple of tourists,
swapping postcards from our foreign lands.
This show of mimicry isn't flattery.
It's simply another way of saying:
"Message received and understood."
Although what's done is dead and gone,
we will not let our love be our ruin;
keeping a solitary spark alive, we foster
the reflections in each other's eyes.*
Now the trick is to find the formula
to transform such fire. With Donne
as prophet, we'll wield the wand –
conjure a new magic, a new alchemy...
And make us both golden.
* "Our eye-beams twisted, and did thread/ Our eyes, upon one double string..." - from 'The Ecstasy' by Donne
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Hi Magic, this is beautiful,
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Thankyou Magic, I shall test
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THIS IS ACE MAGIC. love it
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ooh careful is hes a charmer
"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "
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you got a good easy
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Magic - I can only agree
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Disney and chocolate
"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "
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love the last verse Magic
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Another excellent poem Magic
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love it when a modern poet
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:( I know that feeling too
"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "
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It's interesting because you
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Thinking of your poetry is
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I don't envy you the
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Congratulations Rebecca,
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Woo! Next is you the main
"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "
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dot be nervous hun! Just
"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "
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