Icarus
By MistakenMagic
Mon, 13 Oct 2008
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I was a moth with pale wings
patterned with coffee rings,
thinking that one flutter
could make your heart
skip a beat.
More fool me, that your flame
did not flicker,
did not change for me
and I remained infatuated.
I was that doomed angel
who flew too close to your sun.
My charred feathers fell
like blackened snow
and you handed back my
barbequed heart
presented to me in a bread bun.
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Love the imagery of 'charred
Love the imagery of 'charred feathers' and 'barbecue heart'
Painful!
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Some wonderful imagery here,
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Some wonderful imagery here, as has been said, Magic.
"My charred feathers fell
like blackened snow ..."
These lines are particularly effective.
Again, a highly original piece, with the distinctive 'Magic' hallmark:-)
Tina x
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Captivating and so
Permalink Submitted by SylvanHuntress on
Captivating and so poignant... lovely. Thank you for sharing.
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new MistakenMagic Congrats;
Permalink Submitted by Cavalcader on
new MistakenMagic
Congrats; on well deserved cherry!
such a beautiful poem
done by you as always.
Just seen
julie xx
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