Intensive Care
By MistakenMagic
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I despise this bleached Eden.
This cold and clinical forest
where clear, vine-like tubes
twist around metal trees.
You lie, a ghost
unable to crumple the crisp bed sheets.
A pale Persephone, perfected.
I once placed a vase of sunflowers
on the windowsill, enough
to make Van Gogh blush.
But such gold was unwanted
by the whiteness;
they wilted like ants
under a magnifying glass.
I come with a sack
of glitter-stuffed cards from the kids.
They miss you, you know.
Though Henry won’t be visiting anymore;
he doesn’t understand why I still come.
I am outnumbered by the machines
clustered around your bedside,
druids at witching hour.
They gossip in beeps and whirs.
The mountain range of the monitors
reminds me why I am here.
Somewhere, buried deep within
this featureless shroud,
your heart is still beating.
Something you always said,
“It ain’t over ‘til it’s over.”
I turn to leave and realise
I have not been the only visitor,
Death’s footprint is in the dust.
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Excellent imagery for a
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dont know, thought to try
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simply, You lie, a
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see? blind had to go from
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Hope the coursework is going
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Another superb piece of
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twasnotme :Oo (btw i did a
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