Perpendicular
By MistakenMagic
Wed, 09 Sep 2009
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With all this weight
on my shoulders
I can't stand up straight.
I am the room's fifth corner.
You stretch yourself along my back -
I am perpendicular.
You give me this right-angled form
and I am blinded by a hood of hair
as my eyes burn into the floor.
These heavy arms hang
like pendulums,
tiring of time's demands.
But I will shoulder your burden;
your woes as my own.
I will let my skin shrink under your words ...
Because, like you, we know I will never learn.
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look! i'm the first to
Permalink Submitted by Curse of 222 on
look! i'm the first to post!!! that never happens.
this is fantastic, as always. if anyone can tell me how to post a photo in the comment, i can give you a pineapple.
jason
jason
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i take it "chuffed" is a
Permalink Submitted by Curse of 222 on
i take it "chuffed" is a good thing.
jason
jason
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new Mistakenmagic Well done
Permalink Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Mistakenmagic
Well done on the deserved cherry!
Is it your 100th great.
I looked at photo were you relaxing
or trying to replenish the blood system
good flop and straighten.
Hope put comment right.
Ill never learn either if
I could be a scarecrow
keep mouth shut be better.
julie xx x cavalcader (:-
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"chuffed" doesn't sound good
Permalink Submitted by Curse of 222 on
"chuffed" doesn't sound good to me...maybe it sounds better with a british accent.
jason
jason
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Well done, Magic. Another
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Well done, Magic. Another amazing piece. Where do they all come from? Maybe, don't answer that;-) Oh, to be young again;-)
Tina xxx
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New Mistakenmagic eighteen
Permalink Submitted by Cavalcader on
New Mistakenmagic eighteen wonderful age and memories!too I was so different then.
thanks awe you are naughty
I couldn't use mine on my blog;
for all poems set then cos;not
all mine either, and too many
may ask toys to be made!
he!he! but looks good for comp;
never went through and web; favouite one.
We used to say dead chuffed to.
julie xx hah! hah! I just wish he
be more compatible to me.Oh well nite
I'm go----ing----x
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Poem of the week! are you
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Poem of the week! are you chuffed? hahahahahehehaha...that's my evil take-over-the-world laugh.
jason
jason
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Great piece Magic and well
Permalink Submitted by threeleafshamrock on
Great piece Magic and well worthy of poem of the week, well done.
Chris XXXX
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Hey Magic sorry I'm so late
Hey Magic sorry I'm so late commenting,
this absoultly deserves to be the poem of the week!
I love the opening and closing lines.
You really are a brilliant writer, one of my favs of yours, I think! :)
Beeme xx
k.
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aww it was inspired by my
aww it was inspired by my work, thats fab. You have done a great job here!
k.
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