Peter Pan Poems
By MistakenMagic
Mon, 26 Jan 2009
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They crouch in the corner of my eye,
as wicked and tricky as shadows.
Little urchins!
Their spines arch
like furrowed brows.
Wrapped in whimsical metaphors,
such rags fail to conceal
their deformity.
They are Peter Pan poems;
they refuse to grow up!
Older brothers and sisters
look down on them
with superior smiles.
These poems' eyes are white
like a page - poised for a pen,
as empty as a mourning womb.
They are selfish, selfish
and scuttle with clumsy rhythm.
I knock their greedy hands from my face.
Although I am no Frankenstein,
I will not abandon my children.
No, one day I will return to them
when they have a little more skin
on their bones.
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Dear Magic,I really enjoyed
Permalink Submitted by tamara on
Dear Magic,I really enjoyed this poem and particularly the second and third stanzas:
'Their spines arch
like furrowed brows.'
'Wrapped in whimsical metaphors,
such rags fail to conceal
their deformity.'
A beautiful poem.
Love from Lynne.x
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Like the metaphorical aspect
Permalink Submitted by threeleafshamrock on
Like the metaphorical aspect of this, I think it's clever; write the poems anyway...some of us like the way they are; without to much skin on the bones ;)
Chris X
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I could not pick out a line
I could not pick out a line that I liked best because every single one was so well crafted.
Well done! And I am glad I inspired you! How lovely, when writing breeds writing...! ABC, you triumph again!
J x
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Just popped by to say many,
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Just popped by to say many, many congrats on the cherry. More than well-deserved. You have such a gift for writing about things in an original way. Brilliant poem ... again:-)
Tina xxx
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