SMARTER MISTAKES

By moonphish

Mon, 28 Oct 2013
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history repeats itself
we've all found this is true
if you forget the punchline
then i guess the joke's on you
.
it's like the strip of mobius
with surface, paper thin
you think you're making progress
but just end up where you've been
.
so analyze your memory
when starting an endeavor
you'll still screw up
but strive to make
mistakes that are more clever
.
our lives are like revolving doors
and right on in, we slide
but when we take it all too far
we find we're back outside
.
there's times when we should push ahead
and times that we should lag
there's times when we should pull our loads
and times that we should drag
.
a ring just goes in circles
but a diamond is forever
you're bound to fail
but strive to make
mistakes that are more clever
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Submitted by Rhiannonw on

much to think about there! You have an ability to revolve the reader round in circles too, but in a useful way making a point (as long as he/she doesn't get dizzy!) Rh

 

Submitted by moonphish on

thanks Rhiannon....glad you enjoyed (and didn't get too dizzy) :) - alvin