TWO HUMAN HEARTS
By moonphish
Thu, 01 Aug 2013
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a photo of a human heart's
quite different in design
than one you might see featured
in a lacy valentine
but if you take two human hearts
and place them side by side
then this is when the famous shape
of hearts may be espied
oh sure, a single human heart
will fill a body's need
if blood pumps through the arteries
to everywhere they lead
but humans need much more than blood
that through that body's shoved
what good does that blood really do
if no one else is loved
the joining of two human hearts
creates the perfect shape
that holds those two together
so that love cannot escape
so give your heart to me, my love
and i will give you mine
the combination of the two
are perfect in design
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Hi Alvin, a well thought out
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Alvin,
a well thought out intuitive poem, that brings
together two hearts beating as one.
Very cleverly thought out.
Jenny.
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Hi Alvin, a well thought out
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Alvin,
a well thought out intuitive poem, that brings
together two hearts beating as one.
Very cleverly thought out.
Jenny.
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Thoughtful, nicely written
Permalink Submitted by Linda Wigzell Cress on
Thoughtful, nicely written and loving.
Linda
Linda
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I enjoyed this positive and
I enjoyed this positive and uplifting poem.
Bee.
Bee
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