It's pronounced Nee-Okki

By Moses74

Sun, 25 Jul 2010
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Potato dumplings
Arrayed like soldiers on parade.
A peace offering.
Arms and ammunition,
Hurtful words and misconceptions,
Put aside.
Just to be clear though:

I was right.

Certificate U
Autobiography

Comments

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
Short but very good - and the last two lines made me laugh moses, thanks.

 

Submitted by Moses74 on
Glad you liked it. Thanks for the comment!

Submitted by jennifer on
I think you mean 'like' rather than 'likes' in the second line. Short but quite effective, like the way you've left the last line out on its own for emphasis. J x

 

Submitted by Moses74 on
Jennifer - I absolutely mean like instead of likes - the worst thing is I edited this this morning to add in more punctuation (I had written it without the commas and full-stop), and I still didn't catch it. What a fool I am. Thanks for the comment!