All that is left

Must have been the day for it, I just submitted a poem with the same sort of feel and yours was right under it! Great use of words the entire way through. 'Cold chews on one's bones as the sun singes one's skin' I thought I was a reptile I've felt this so much! :P I hope writing brings you a sense of accomplishment like it does me :)

Hi MP, missing hearing from you more often. This one sent a shiver down my spine. The second stanza is particularly poignant. If all you have left is words then I hope you share them with us whenever possible.

'Solitude is a simple state not sought but suffered' - my favourite lines, but all of this is stunning - congrats on the cherries, MP :) Rachel xx

I appreciate the honest transparency of this poem and thinks it works quite well in this piece. also, i love the ending where you state all that is left and the deteriorating state of this.. well done.. Jose..

agree... 'Solitude is a simple state not sought but suffered' my favourite lines, well done