This morning I passed a wonderful scene
By Parson Thru
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This morning I passed a wonderful scene
An A4 Pacific raising steam
Beautiful blue and black design
coupled against the proportioned line
of a Southern Pacific, modern and lean
resplendent in British Railways Green
And through a gap I spied the mass
of a Great Western “Castle” Class
“Spotter”, I hear you dismissively say
But don’t be so harsh for I spent the day
in a basement room not far away
impenetrable to a single ray
of light
Then leaving late
I completely forgot what I’d earlier seen
It may have been no more than a dream
But, if that’s true
I’ll render it anyway here for you
Provide you with a brief distraction
A wonderful scene of steam traction
Hide the newspaper, switch off the news
forget their editorial views
Join me in this window seat
on a yard where elegant giants meet
Watch their boilers come to life
Close the page on war and strife
for now
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beautiful
i know nothing of rhyme, metre, cadence etc. but this is beautiful. i find myself joining you to watch these 'elegant giants' and delight in watching their power and beauty.
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.. a flash of beauty on a
.. a flash of beauty on a humdrum day. Thank you!
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I'll look for beauty on my
I'll look for beauty on my journey to work through the gridlock - should have got into it ages ago!
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'A flash of beauty' indeed,
'A flash of beauty' indeed, PT, on yet another rather grey day.
Tina
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I really enjoyed sharing your
I really enjoyed sharing your enjoyment of the distractions and in a lovely flowing rhythmic form, with the rhyming deftly helping that rhythm. Rhiannon
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