Life-

By pinda

Fri, 12 Jun 2009
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I am trapped in a cave of emotions;
my worries and fears stir commotion.

Who am I? What is my identity?
Why did my dear love abandon me?

Betrayal by my “so-called” best friend;
will this cave of emotions ever end?

I try to find a way out but emotions grow deeper;
there is no way around but as I move the cave is steeper.

Though the cave is overwhelming there is no need for me to pout;
in the distance pain awaits but I see a light which means a way out.

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Comments

Submitted by Beeme on
Hey pinda, I really like this poem. I like the imagery. well done for your well deserved cherry :D I especially like the ending. I wrote a poem abit like this it's more romantic; Suddenly I find a hundred thoughts running through my mind. And they just don't make sense. Then why do I? Think back everyday. The same images spring to mind, when I had it all with you. And I let you go.. slipped away like some twisted fate. Should I want sympathy? Want to avoid prosecution?Want to avoid being different; because history warns that it wont end well. I guess we started with nothing. And then the nothings grew bored and wanted more and more. So are plain lives became tangled; in a web on lies, love and liaisons. So should I plead for more time? Can I change your mind?un-break your broken heart?And in an instant win back your love? Just thought i'd share that. Betrayal sucks :D Beeme x

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Submitted by pinda on
I get what you're saying Beeme.Yes,betrayal does suck unless it was someone who's not worth it betraying you.In that case you just happily move on.

Submitted by Beeme on
LOL, yes happily moving on is the best thing to do. Hard as it is. (:

k.