Loan $harks

By pinda

Fri, 14 Aug 2009
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Coercion-browbeating-intimidation.
Shame the people with your red paint.
Thousands suffer and die, you are the causation.
Unnerving pig heads, stand outside my apartment.
Aghasted- anxious- and afraid.
Death threats on sheets, in my bedroom compartment.
Just because I haven't paid.
O $ P $, owe money, pay money.
Sprayed on my childs play house.
All this for a illegal loan, from a dishonest way.

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Submitted by pinda on
Loan sharks: 1)Shame the people with your red paint- Paint red on victims homes as a threat that blood will be spilt. 2)Unnerving pig heads- Henchman of sharks, stand outside peoples houses with pig masks. Suggesting, if you don't pay you will be slaughtered. 2)O $ P $, - the first warning from sharks to pay up. Scary stuff.

Submitted by Beeme on
I enjoyed this. And this line is very true,'All this for a illegal loan, from a dishonest way' Particulary liked these lines; 'Aghasted- anxious- and afraid. Death threats on sheets, in my bedroom compartment' I went away to devon once with my family and we rented a house, whilst we were staying their we recieved a fax from loan sharks, saying that the owner owed them money and that they were going to start collecting items for the amount of money, it was so scary and it wasn't even our house! Beeme xx

k.

Submitted by pinda on
wow, next time you go somewhere, make sure you check out about past owners aswell, it always helps.

Submitted by Beeme on
Yes, we are much more careful now! :-)

k.