I could kiss him forever

By Pink Lady

Fri, 19 Apr 2013
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I could kiss him for ever
I could kiss him for ever
Kiss That bit of fluffy tummy he showed me
White -
A white love
Fresh
as rainbow raindrops
To my ocean
"I am determined"
he said
"to be a part of your life"
and my heart leapt
Splash!
to the stars

Certificate PG
Poem
Autobiography

Comments

Submitted by maisie on
I really like the freshness of this piece. I think for me the poem ends at Splash/1 the closing 'to the stars'' a little hackneyed.

maisie angel Guess what?  I'm still alive!